
Hello, hello!!
The topic today is about the Pablo’s blog, this article is a critique (constructive) about a post and the blog´s appearance.
Pablo, doesn´t worry, I will be a very kind soul!
The elected post was published on day May, 30th (my best friend), In general the things that he written are very sweet (he killed me), I think that he have a wonderful friendship, but this post need a photography, I want to meet his friends! Maybe for this reason nothing posted this article (is very sad hahaha).
As for the blog´s appearance I will be stricter, I don´t like the colors are boring, it needs shiny colors (sorry Pablo it´s true).
Moreover almost always his posts doesn´t have photos, I think that in a blog the pictures are essential. But not everything are bad, the structure is good, the blog is in order is harmonic.
My last board is … PLEASE Pablo use a letter bigger. I´m short sighted!
bye
see you!
is a good critique... but if you want to be a sweet person, the critique said other think ... :P
ReplyDeleteregards!
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ReplyDeleteThis photo is not much favored to pablo. xD
ReplyDeleteSee you!
Hey Guiselle
ReplyDeleteI agree: small fonts are hard on the eyes.
if you can see I wasn´t so badly.
ReplyDeleteI hope the same of you.
I see in class.
jajajaj
ReplyDeletethe photo is very funny
he's drunk! xD
see you
Hello Guiselle:
ReplyDeleteIs a good critique because you him know very well